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A Quiet Night In...

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Svetta Kistrun loved nights in.
Wearing her snuggliest pyjamas, snuggled up on the couch with her girlfriend watching crappy TV, either a freshly delivered pizza or gigantic tub of icecream shared between them. It was her idea of heaven. Grace had recently started her watching BimboVision, and after binge viewing three series, she had to admit it was growing on her.
She giggled a little as one of the vacuous but gorgeous blondes struggled to bake a cake, and ended up licking the mixing bowl clean...and then realising she'd forgotten to pour the mix into a baking tray first! She ended up with a little blob of cake mix on the end of her nose, and spent the rest of the episode crosseyed and trying to lick it off, never seeming to realise that her tongue couldn't quite reach.
Grace saw her giggle, and giggled, tilting her head to the side and resting it on Svetta's shoulder.
"Babe..."
"If you're about to ask me to bake a cake..."
"How'd you guess?"
"Call it a hunch." Svetta giggled as Grace swooped in close, licking a smudge of ice cream from Svetta's cheek. "You're adorable."
"Dang it, I was just about to tell you that." They both giggled. "I freaking love you, Svetlana Kistrun. Seriously, what did I ever do to deserve you in my life?"
"You showed up and busted a hypnotist as I was happily handing over my purse?"
"Oh, yeah. That."
"We should totally try that again." Grace arched an eyebrow. "What? It was kinda fun! I could play the cop this time, and you could be the cute, hypnotized victim..."
"Ohhh, don't tempt me, Kistrun." Grace chuckled, absently stroking Svetta's strawberry blonde hair. "Besides, I'm totally not getting sleepy."
There was a sound of smashing. Svetta yelped, the sudden noise startling her enough to send her tumbling from the couch, a fluffy sock remaining pinned under Grace's leg, trapped and torn free from her foot as she fell, its little smiley bunny face being smothered beneath the lovely curve of the detective's rear, seperated from buttock by nothing more than short, short, short sports shorts. A low, quiet, whispery "pssssshhhhhhh" filled the apartment.
It didn't take long for the gas to take effect. Grace closed her eyes and laid down on the couch, while Svetta simply let her head fall back and rested on the floor. Within a few seconds, both girls were snoring.



Five men, in black flak jackets, gas masks, gloves and boots, with long, heavy-looking guns in hand and pockets bulging with little gadgets, burst in through the door, reducing it to splinters and stomping through the breach, watching the two unconscious beauties carefully.
"Report; gas grenade effective, target and civilian neutralised. Thirty minutes to transport back to base, go, go go!" One, probably the leader, barked, waving his hands. The other four moved off in two-man teams, one grabbing his victim by the ankles, the other taking the wrists, and together, with practiced, military efficiency, they lifted the pair of sleeping, unresisting women.
One man chuckled.
"Heh. I thought the Detective was supposed to be tough?"
"Must've been distracted by her little girlfriend. She's pretty cute."
"Eh, I'm more about blondes myself. You can have cutie, I'll take sexy any day."
"How about ass-kicky?" Chirped a third voice, taking the squad of soldiers by surprise. They all dropped their victims, hands grabbing for their weapons while the girls limp bodies fell to the floor. Svetta's head bonked against the edge of the coffee table.
Stood by the window was a girl, pale and blonde. Judging by her height, she can't have been older than her late teens. She wore a skintight, white cloth bodysuit, with dark blue gloves and boots, and a strip of dark blue running down her torso, up over her collar, and merging with the mask that covered her eyes and, by extension, her cheeks. Her chin, mouth, nose and the top of her head were exposed. A dark blue cape with a golden interior was wrapped around her neck and shoulders, and fluttered anxiously around her ankles. A golden 'J' was embroided on her chest, in swirling, ancient font. Her lips were twisted into a little smile, her sky blue eyes sparkled from behind her mask, and her straight, golden blonde hair reached down to the bottom of her shoulderblades.
"Uhh...why isn't the gas working on her? Shouldn't she be snoring like these two?"
"Who cares!? Just bonk her on the head and let's get outta here!"
She chuckled. "Really?" The nearest soldier swung a punch at her face. Bones audibly crunched. She didn't even flinch. He fell back, screaming, clutching at his broken hand. "Really?"
"AGH! It's like punching a wall!"
"She's a Meta, fire, fire, FIRE!" A storm of gunfire harmlessly pinged off her. She rested her hands on her hips, rolling her eyes as the bullets hit with absolutely no effect. She didn't even seem to notice the impacts.
"You guys aren't too smart, are you?"
There was an almighty 'WHOOSH' of air as she took flight, soaring forwards. She flew shoulder-first into the nearest soldier, the force of the collision sending him flying into two of his companions, both of whom crumpled under his weight. The fourth man tried to fire his gun one-handed, his crumpled and broken hand held tenderly against his chest. A bullet bounced off her eye. She grabbed the nearby coffee table and, one-handed, hurled it into him hard enough to knock him into the wall. The table shattered on impact, and he, like the others, slumped unconscious.
"DON'T MOVE!" The one remaining soldier called. He had his forearm wrapped around the neck of the slumbering Detective Harrison, and a gun pressed against her forehead. She simply rolled her eyes and, moving at superhuman speeds, crossed the room, slapped his gun away and, with a tap on the forehead, knocked him soundly unconscious. Both he and the still-drugged Detective fell, limp and lifeless, to the ground.
"Well, that was easy."
She smirked, craned her neck from side to side, listening to the muscles fizzle and pop, then cracked her knuckles and took a deep breath, sucking up all the gas from the room and holding it in her puffed-out cheeks. It took her half a second to fly out through the window and blow the gas out into the night sky, where it wouldn't hurt anyone.
With the air cleared, it wasn't long before Detective Harison and her redhead girlfriend began to yawn and blearily rub their eyes, shaking their heads a little to clear away any lingering grogginess.
"Wha-"
"What happened?"
"Detective, are you okay? These men gassed you two and tried to carry you away...'course, they didn't get too far."
"Um..." Grace rested her head in her hands, pinching the bridge of her nose. "Nhh...you...you stopped them?" The girl in the mask nodded, smiling. "Thank you. Uh...what do I call you?"
"Jupiter Girl, ma'am."
"Really?"
"Just another concerned citizen doing her bit to make this city a nicer, safer place for everyone! 'course, the superpowers help..." She shrugged, giggling. "You two ladies have a nice evening. And don't worry; Jupiter Girl is here to help!"
With that, she flew out through the window, leaving the two freshly awakened girls to gape in amazement. Grace looked around, surveying the quintet of unconscious soldiers. Then at the broken door, window and coffee table. None of those had been cheap. And then at the dozens of spent and crumpled bullets scattered across the floor. And then her mind moved on to the inevitable mountain of paperwork she'd have to file at the station.
Detective Grace Harrison hung her head and groaned. Another superhero.  
"Greeeeeeat."
A very quick one (roughly an hour with my attention divided between writing and Hell's Kitchen) with a few purposes: 
A) I haven't done any cute Svetta/Grace scenes for a while. 
B) Every healthy relationship needs some shared sleepy peril. Trust me, I'm a schoolteacher.
C) I quite like fun, punchy little action-oriented stories. As a bit of light entertainment, and the very beginning of a much bigger storyline, I'm pretty happy with this. 
D) I kinda had a new character and wanted to introduce her somehow. I'm not sure, but I think this might just about do the job...

WHO IS THE MYSTERIOUS JUPITER GIRL? IS SHE ALL SHE APPEARS TO BE? JUST HOW POWERFUL IS THIS NEW PLAYER IN JUPITER CITY? AND WILL SHE BE A FRIEND AND ALLY, OR A RIVAL AND FOE TO OUR UBER-HEROINE?
Gee, I wish I could tell ya. But then I'd have to work it out myself first... MYSTERIES ARE FUN! ^.^
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Crisis-Comics's avatar
I'll have to keep this in mind for a future story. Let's just say I plan to make it quite a doozy.